ext_61611 ([identity profile] elliotsmelliot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alliecat8 2008-02-03 03:07 pm (UTC)

This was fantastic. A unique look at Jack's guilt and a clever way to handle the coffin issue. That was an interesting comparison of Michael and Christian and why Jack thinks he would be a dangerous father. What struck me the most was the repeated use of the word children because it seemed to stop meaning the little ones he left behind and started to mean everyone. They are/were all someone's child once, even Jack.

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