ext_14883 ([identity profile] invisiblelove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alliecat8 2008-07-19 03:12 am (UTC)

I am LOVING this! Another wonderful installment <3

Sun’s work depended on her being cold, calculating.

What a startling contrast to her name and the gentleness she so often displayed on the island. I love how you expanded upon what we were given in her flash forwards.

Fantastic work! I eagerly await the next chapter :)
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