Very nice. There's a lot of emotionality here, but I think it balances out with the physical pretty well.
The parts I loved: - Sawyer's hand turning from a fist to holding Jack's hand - the part about Johnny Got His Gun. That book was so freaking creepy! It makes a lot of sense for Sawyer to be thinking about it here - Sawyer being all, "you love broken things, jackass!" Truer words were never spoken -- and yet, there's another layer to that here. I love the part before that too with Jack using the sign that prompts Sawyer's outburst.
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Date: 2008-09-15 12:18 am (UTC)The parts I loved:
- Sawyer's hand turning from a fist to holding Jack's hand
- the part about Johnny Got His Gun. That book was so freaking creepy! It makes a lot of sense for Sawyer to be thinking about it here
- Sawyer being all, "you love broken things, jackass!" Truer words were never spoken -- and yet, there's another layer to that here. I love the part before that too with Jack using the sign that prompts Sawyer's outburst.
I'm crazy curious to see how this all ends.