I really loved the previous chapter, that part with Jack reading to Sawyer and the ending part were just gorgeous. While here, I surely won't complain if you gave this scene a whole chapter. Apart from the fact that it was some hot sex, but the emotion behind it was so raw and palpable, which is what I like best in sex scenes anyway ;)
I haven't read that book but I knew the plot and this does indeed work here, it's a connection that I can really see Sawyer making. I loved how the progression mirrored their usual dynamic and how IC the both of them were. Sawyer's line about Jack loving broken things really did hit the main point, but it was just beautiful to see how he gave in just after that. And I'm probably losing track here but anyway, I love this and I can't wait to see how it plays out *crosses fingers* ♥.
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Date: 2008-09-16 11:13 am (UTC)I really loved the previous chapter, that part with Jack reading to Sawyer and the ending part were just gorgeous. While here, I surely won't complain if you gave this scene a whole chapter. Apart from the fact that it was some hot sex, but the emotion behind it was so raw and palpable, which is what I like best in sex scenes anyway ;)
I haven't read that book but I knew the plot and this does indeed work here, it's a connection that I can really see Sawyer making. I loved how the progression mirrored their usual dynamic and how IC the both of them were. Sawyer's line about Jack loving broken things really did hit the main point, but it was just beautiful to see how he gave in just after that. And I'm probably losing track here but anyway, I love this and I can't wait to see how it plays out *crosses fingers* ♥.