Sorry it took me so long to comment! You won the dubious honour of being the first person I read today and the last one I commented on (I need to find a better system, seriously).
So glad you're back!! And boy, are you! This was incredibly atmospheric, really dark and so very much in tune with sight, sound, touch. Sometimes you just hit it, girl. James' grandfather hating him for looking like his dad, and the way they interacted... that was almost as haunting to me as the creepy night sounds. Good job!
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Date: 2005-12-15 05:51 am (UTC)So glad you're back!! And boy, are you! This was incredibly atmospheric, really dark and so very much in tune with sight, sound, touch. Sometimes you just hit it, girl. James' grandfather hating him for looking like his dad, and the way they interacted... that was almost as haunting to me as the creepy night sounds. Good job!
*latches on to you, doesn't let you escape, ever*