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For [livejournal.com profile] lostsquee's Queen [livejournal.com profile] foxxcub, who requested boy-kissing.

Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: hard R



It’s only a kiss.

They are, after all, in the open, lying by the fire in the moonlight where anyone could happen upon them. They are, after all, only the most tenuous of friends by day. But the nights are different, the nights are for slipping away to the privacy of the jungle or Sawyer’s tent, for releasing the pent-up stress of the day in the haven of one another’s bodies. Now an unexpected chill has driven them here, to the heat of the bonfire, under the stars and in plain view of anyone who cares to look. It’s warm enough but still Jack craves Sawyer’s heat, and so he reaches for him. After all, it’s only a kiss.

But Sawyer tastes like warm whiskey and he smells like smoke and sin. Jack’s breath hitches as his tongue goes back for more, and then more, and then more again. He feels a steady vibration of need build beneath his palms as he slides them along the ridge of Sawyer’s spine, and Sawyer moans into his mouth. Jack tries to swallow the sound, but instead a moan slips from his own throat as well. He doesn’t know who arches into whom, but suddenly their bodies are flush, chest to chest and thigh to thigh. Sawyer begins a slow thrusting rhythm, and as cock slides against cock, Jack tells himself, “Only a kiss.”

Only a kiss, as hands stroke heated flesh. Only a kiss, as tongue twines with tongue. Only a kiss, as Sawyer fists the fabric of Jack’s shirt and Jack’s toes curl into the sand. Only a kiss, and the sky above them shatters and the stars rain down. It’s only a kiss, but tonight a kiss is all they need.

End

Date: 2006-07-15 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isis2015.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* Ah, I just went off to my happy place. :) In which things such as this happen all the time. Lovely hun. Simply lovely.

Date: 2006-07-15 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, luv!

And don't you wish we could be on that beach watching that "kiss" unfold? ;)

Date: 2006-07-15 03:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fosfomifira.livejournal.com
This is absolutely beautiful. It's just a perfect little ficlet, self contained. So many great little details, like Jack's toes curling into the sand, the description of Sawyer's scent. Everything we need to know about Jack and Sawyer is here.

Date: 2006-07-15 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much! You've been writing some amazingly gorgeous stuff, yourself. This luau is the perfect way to spend the summer, isn't it?

Date: 2006-07-15 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com
My brain is so dead right now, I cannot form coherent thought. I think OMGGUH is about all I'm capable of at this point.

Date: 2006-07-15 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! I thoroughly enjoyed your day! :D

Date: 2006-07-15 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inthekeyofd.livejournal.com
The stories this week have officially killed part of my brain.

I mean, what can I say about this, really, how do you put into words, *GUH*

All I can do is *sigh* and say I LOVED THIS!!!

Date: 2006-07-15 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you loved it! Wow, I think all the kissing yesterday seduced everybody's muses into writing! That makes me ridiculously happy. ♥

Date: 2006-07-15 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laliu.livejournal.com
short, sweet, and hot. love that the world around them starts to implode with a kiss.

Date: 2006-07-15 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much! :D

Date: 2006-07-15 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eponine119.livejournal.com
I just loved this. It's so short and it does so much. The first paragraph does such a wonderful job of capturing a mood, right down to the chill in the air, but more about how nighttime can be magic, and the darkness is good for secrets.

I love the use of repeated words and phrases, too.

Date: 2006-07-15 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
It really means a lot to me that you liked this. I'm trying to teach myself how to write something in a day, and not second-guess my words to death. Between Comment Porn Day and Queen for a Day, this summer is turning out to be a great learning experience! ♥

Date: 2006-07-15 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfdutch.livejournal.com
Ooh, now that's a kissing scene.

*loves*

(And I keep wanting to use my icon of Jack and Sawyer kissing but there isn't one! And that's just so wrong!)


Date: 2006-07-15 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
And I keep wanting to use my icon of Jack and Sawyer kissing but there isn't one! And that's just so wrong!

I'm tempted to go and gak the one that [livejournal.com profile] uberaeryn made. ;)

I'm so glad you liked the ficlet! I'm trying to teach myself how to write "short and (hopefully) sweet." Thanks so much for the encouraging words; I needed to hear them! ♥

Date: 2006-07-15 05:31 am (UTC)
ext_16765: (HOT lips)
From: [identity profile] arabella-hope.livejournal.com
The structure of this is so fabulous and rhythmic, and the build...damn, I am so THERE. I absolutely love every word.

So...*smooch*, lol

Date: 2006-07-15 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Thank you! You know with those two, a kiss is never just a kiss. ;) I'm so glad you liked it!

Date: 2006-07-15 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cmonkatiekatie.livejournal.com
I'm so incapable of feedback at this point. I did just read it three times, if thats any clue as to how much I loved it.

Date: 2006-07-15 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Three times? Thank you! I'm honored that you liked it that much! ♥

Date: 2006-07-15 09:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astra2104.livejournal.com
Yeah, and a sigh is just a sigh
*gives you lots of sighs*
This might just be the best morning of my life.

Date: 2006-07-15 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
You woke up to a great big ol' lovefest, didn't you? SO much kissing going around! Thank you for reading, and thank you for liking! :D

Date: 2006-07-15 10:52 am (UTC)
ext_16473: (Lost Jack water sex by avardrobe_icons)
From: [identity profile] ellel.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

lying by the fire in the moonlight where anyone could happen upon them.
This is...perfect.Stunningly simple and perfect.And GUHHH!
*saves in memories*

Date: 2006-07-15 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
THANK YOU! I just adore you, you know that? (and I'm still a little dizzy from those pics of Foxy you posted, GUH)

Date: 2006-07-15 07:35 pm (UTC)
ext_16473: (Lost Jack by _milz_)
From: [identity profile] ellel.livejournal.com
awwwwwww,you're sweet!
*luvs you*

And he is...foxy;P
How can a men be so damn sexy?

Date: 2006-07-16 08:32 pm (UTC)
ext_67111: (Default)
From: [identity profile] holycitygirl.livejournal.com
You always make me smile. There's always some point in the middle or the beginning but before the end where I just can't help myself.

:)

Thanks for that.

Date: 2006-07-18 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I'm glad I can make you smile! :D

Date: 2006-07-20 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hkath.livejournal.com
This is wonderful. I love how familiar they are with each other in this. And your imagery is so great, how you get little glimpses of how they're affecting each other, and then such a beautiful image of the stars.

Date: 2006-07-21 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Thank you! This one was so short it almost doesn't count, but I'm glad you liked it anyway! ♥

Date: 2006-07-27 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com
awwww. short but so sweet. I so wanna see that kiss. although the surgeon general probably would censor it, you know, as it has the potential of killing on the spot a multitude of fangirls.... but what a way to go! ♥

(oh, don't feel the need to reply to my comments, I'm being a busy bee reading it all...)

Date: 2006-07-27 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
You ARE a busy bee. I love it! As for the voyeurism, YEAH, BABY! I'm right there with you! *drools* Who needs more than a kiss, when a kiss covers every base there is? Mmmmmm.

Thanks for drooling with me. ;D

Date: 2006-07-31 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apsik.livejournal.com
I've just read all fur of the fics you posted at sawyer_jack in one post... wow... I've just came from my vacation and this is what I found waiting for me - fantastic four fics. Love them ;)

Date: 2006-07-31 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alliecat8.livejournal.com
Thank you! I posted four there? Heh, um, I think I've been a little manic lately. ;) I even wrote some different pairings and gen and ficlets that I didn't post in the comms...something about hiatus, I guess, I'm just trying to get my Lost fix however I can! Thank you for taking the time to read through all of it, and THANK YOU for liking them! :D
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